Friday, April 25, 2014

2014 APRIL PAD CHALLENGE: DAY 25

)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Write a "last straw" poem. Everyone encounters situations in which they decide they're not going to take it anymore (whatever "it" happens to be). It could be a loud noise, an abusive partner, someone taking the Pop Tart but not throwing the box away, or whatever. Write about the moment, the aftermath, or take an unexpected path to your poem.
)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
MY EFFORT
=================


get over it



the woman i love
just said good-bye
that woman just said
bye-bye
the woman i love
just told me good-bye
i was just about
ready to die


but a sweet-honey voice said
you better hang around
a sweet voice said
hang around
this sweet sweet voice said
you better hang around
can't make good love
in the ground











No comments:

Post a Comment